Friday, January 19, 2018

The Value of First Thoughts

Shannon Dittemore is the author of the Angel Eyes novels. She has an overactive imagination and a passion for truth. Her lifelong journey to combine the two is responsible for a stint at Portland Bible College, performances with local theater companies, and an affinity for mentoring teen writers. Since 2013, Shannon has taught mentoring tracks at a local school where she provides junior high and high school students with an introduction to writing and the publishing industry. For more about Shan, check out her website, Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and Pinterest

Last Friday I wrote about the importance of committing to an idea. Today, I'm  going to talk about my first thoughts on a project and why it's so important for me to get them onto the page. I want to make it clear though, that this isn't necessarily STEP #2 for me. As I mentioned in last week's post, committing to an idea isn't something I do lightly and it isn't something I ever do before squirreling around with my narrator's voice and a character or two on the page.

This is all part of STEP #1 for me and at this point I'm little more than a discovery writer. A discovery writer is someone who sits down to write with little or no idea of what they plan to do or where they want their story to go. Another term for a writer like this would be a pantser, so named because this writer writes by the seat of his or her pants.

Of late, I've started to pull away from the term pantser and lean into the term discovery writer. It feels like what I'm doing when I sit down to write. Author Joan Didion said this:



Me too, Joan. Me too. At this point in the process, when an idea seems to have merit, when it entices me, when it disturbs my sleep with unanswered questions, I need to sit down so I can discover what it is I think about the idea.

In many ways, Joan Didion was talking about the bigger picture. She was talking about writing to figure out what you think of the world, and society, and the human condition. But in every stage of writing a book, this quote rings true. If you're like me, you must sit down with your idea and you must write on it to figure out what you think.

At this early stage, the writing is all about my narrator and my protagonist.

The way it works is simple. I pull out my notes. Yes, I have notes. If you haven't read Jill's Wednesday post, you should do that. She talks about making lists for world-building and characterization. I do something similar in the early days of toying with an idea. I'll jot down every idea that pops into my head about a story concept and I'll keep it in a notebook that I haul with me when I run errands or sit in the school parking lot waiting for my kids. It's not fancy. It's just a cheap notebook from Target with ideas arranged in no particular order. But I make sure to keep it at my elbow when I'm sitting down to flesh out my first thoughts.

With that notebook nearby, I'll read through the list and choose some aspect of the story that can easily be translated into a moment. Truly, it does not matter which moment I choose, but I've noticed that I have a tendency to choose a point in time that could feasibly be worked into an opening chapter. Just the way I seem to work.

Once I have my moment selected, I give myself two maybe three minutes to think about it and then I set a timer for fifteen minutes and I don't stop writing until the timer goes off. We call these word sprints and they're immeasurably valuable. They can help you capture your first thoughts on any given subject, moment, or concept. After fifteen minutes of writing, I do one of two things. I either set the timer for another fifteen minutes and keep going, or I allow myself to read back what I've written, typos and all.

I do this as many times as I need to until I can answer these two questions:

Who is my narrator? And do I like my protagonist?

Things I want to discover about my narrator during these early writing sessions:

Point of view: Who is telling my story? Will there be one narrator or several? Is my narrator also the hero of the story (first person) or is someone else describing events as they happen (third person)? If so, is this someone else an all-knowing, all-seeing omniscient narrator? In any case, how much knowledge, experience, education does my narrator have?

Tense: When is my story taking place? Is my story taking place in the past? If so, is it the recent past or the distant past? Maybe my story is taking place in the present?

When I first did this exercise for the book I'm working on now, I hated the way my first thoughts fell onto the page. I didn't like the narrator (omniscent, btw) at all. But what I learned when I read my words back is that I really did like my protagonist (my hero). I liked her story as I was beginning to piece it together in my head, and I wanted to examine it further.

When I came back to the page, I chose a different moment from my notebook to zero in on and I began in first person, present tense. During this fifteen minute sprint, I didn't deviate from first person, present. I stayed with my hero in that moment until the fifteen minutes were up.

When I started the timer over again, I chose another moment from my notebook, an earlier moment in my hero's life, and though I stayed in first person, I switched to past tense.

After those fifteen minutes were up, I realized how much I liked this format, moving back and forth between my hero's current struggle and her past life. It was an eye-opening half hour for me, and though it took two different writing sessions to figure it out, I now know everything I need to know about the point of view and tense of my work-in-progress, and I've discovered that I do really like my protagonist. I want to know more about her. More than that, I think we'll get along well enough for me to allow her to rent space in my head for the better part of a year.

Things I want to discover about my protagonist during these early writing sessions:

Who is the best hero for this story? Sometimes my great story idea revolves around a concept or a set piece or high impact event and I'm not entirely sure who is best suited to tell the story. If you're in this place, you may have many options. If so, you may decide to devote a word sprint or two to each of these characters until you're able to zero in on a hero or two worth following. Yes, you can have multiple heroes, but no, we're not going to dig into that today.

Does my hero have an easily definable goal? My hero does. The story I'm working on is based loosely on a historical event, so I have some idea where my hero is heading. If you're using my word sprint/discovery writing method to flesh these things out, you don't need to focus on this goal during the free write, but having it in mind will help you. If you don't know what your hero's goal is, these word sprints might set you on the road to discovering it.

While these early writing sessions don't always leave me with words worth keeping, they do set the tone for every minute of writing time that will follow. They teach me about my own frame of mind when I enter this world and they begin to evoke emotions in me that will eventually make it onto the page. The story itself starts to take on a flavor, a vibe, a style. And whether or not that flavor, vibe, and style are appealing to me is very important. And with just a handful of writing sprints I'm able to discern if this idea is worth pouring time and creative energy into or if I would be better suited working with another idea altogether.

Tell me, do you use word sprints or free writes early in your writing process, or do you save that for later?

Wednesday, January 17, 2018

Writing a New Story: Making Lists for Worldbuilding and Characterization

Jill Williamson is a chocolate loving, daydreaming, creator of kingdoms. She writes weird books in lots of weird genres like fantasy (Blood of Kings and Kinsman Chronicles), science fiction (Replication), and dystopian (The Safe Lands trilogy). She has a podcast/vlog at www.StoryworldFirst.com. You can also find Jill on InstagramFacebookTwitterPinterest, or on her author website. Tagboth (Tag for short) is a goldhorn dragon from Belfaylinn, a hidden fantasy realm on the western end of the Sargasso Sea. Jill is working on the first book of this tale for this year's Grow an Author series.

Last week I talked about where I start when writing a new story, which included how I choose between all of my ideas and trying to narrow down my vague concept to a concrete story idea. In case you missed it, this tear I decided to write Onyx Eyes, a story about a fairy guard who sets out to find and rescue a missing princess, only to fall under the control of a human girl, who is looking for her brother. 

You may have noticed that my story description has changed some since last week, in which I described my story like this: 

I came up with the idea of two nations at war. One kidnaps the other nation's princess, and my hero, her guard, must get her back. As I thought more about my fairies, I wanted them to be the size of humans. I pictured something more like Tolkein's Legolas than Disney's Tinkerbell. This led me to creating two races of fae, which I tentatively called aerials and grounders. (Still not sure I love those terms.) Aerials have wings. Grounders do not. My hero, a grounder, must sneak into the aerial kingdom to rescue the grounder princess. He believes he can only do this by impersonating an aerial, and since he does not have wings, he sets out into the mountains with the intent of wielding a forbidden bonding spell with a dragon (enter Tagboth), which will enable him to grow wings.
That was a long and rambling description. Necessary, since I was in the absolute early stage of planning a story, but not really the kind of thing I would say when someone asks what my story is about. So as this past week has gone by and I've thought more about it, I was able to narrow down my story idea to that one sentence. It's not exactly a logline, but it's tighter and adds some good conflict.

Now that I know what my story will be about, I need to know more about the characters and the world they live in. For me, these two go hand in hand. I mean, sure, I can think up a loose backstory for any character, family tree, childhood memories, lies formed that will shape the character's future, etc. But I can't do that well until I know where they're from. The environment in which a character grows up is significant. It has such a powerful impact on a person's life. So, before I can move on to drawing a map (which is one of my favorite parts!), I need to do some basic worldbuilding. And I start by making a list. 



For me, with worldbuilding, it's best to start with a list because it keeps me on track and away from the danger of thinking I need to worldbuild everything (a.k.a. Storyworld Builder's Disease). I don't need to know everything about a world to write a book or even a series. What I do need depends on the story I am writing. Below is a list I made for things I need to worldbuild, research, figure out, or just plain decide, for the story Onyx Eyes. This is only an initial list. As I work on the story, new things will come up that I will need to figure out. But for now, this list is a place to start. I added in parentheses why I needed those things to help you peer a little deeper into my head.

Onyx Eyes Worldbuilding To Do List

-Where are these magical, hidden islands? (I wanted my story to take place in a fantasy world that exists here, right now, on earth. I liked the idea of an island. I just needed to figure out where to put it.)
-How do the fae people travel? Portals? Research the mythology of "thin places." (Since their world is hidden from ours [kind of like Wonder Woman's Paradise Island], I needed a way that these magical fae people could travel between their world and ours.)
-I wanted their world to be medieval. They have rejected the rest of the world's technological advances. I needed to know why.
-How does their magic work? Research rocks and gemstones, their meanings.
-I will call my magic stonecasting. I need to make a list of stones for stonecasting and what each does.
-List my Fae types. I have grounders, aerials, and I decided to add merrows (mermaids of a sort). Figure out the major differences between the three.
-Research fairy changelings. (I wanted my human girl's brother to be acting weird. He is actually missing and a fae changeling has replaced him/is impersonating him.)
-Research bat wings and the logistics of a human with wings. Can they fly? How does that work? What are the physics and the problems with the physics? (If Drake is going to get wings and fly, I'm going to need to describe that, so I need some research there.)
-Research the tradition of a pilgrimage to the Holy Land once in a lifetime. Research Israeli tradition. (I had an idea brewing that there would be some sort of Mecca for the fae people, so I wanted to learn more about such things.)
-Choose a language for the fae language. (I chose Hebrew again [which I used in my Blood of Kings and Kinsman Chronicles], though this time I will always use real Hebrew since part of my reveal [shhh] is that some of these "fae" are actually angels.)
-Brainstorm lists of places for my map. (I needed to choose some sort of method of naming places and start making lists of place names. Since most fae legends came from European folklore, I chose to start my research with the ancient roots of German, Celtic, Irish, and Scottish languages.)
-Brainstorm lists of fae names.
-Create a list of slang terms. (While I'm searching through old languages, looking for place names and character names, I will also keep my eyes peeled for potential slang words.)
-Research dragons. (Tagboth will be a big part of this story. I want him to be cool.)
-Research armor made from leather and stone and natural materials. (I want my fae people to use what is around them.)
-Research fairy lore and types. Incorporate these into my storyworld.
-Research the morphology of a butterfly for Aerial people. (I loved the idea that aerials are not born with wings, that wings develop in adolescence.)
-Research mermaids/merrows. (I didn't want tails. I wanted webbed fingers and toes.)
-Research the mythology of elves for my grounder people.
-Decide where these people came from. Were they always living in this place? Or did they come here. If so, when? How? Why? And why do the three people types hate each other? What are they fighting about? If they hate each other, why don't they go find some other magical place to live? Why do all three stay put in this place? Could this place be a Mecca of sorts?
-Research the Bermuda Triangle and the Sargasso Sea. (I decided to look into placing my island in this part of the world. It already has lots of myth and legend around it, so it seems like an ideal place. My concern is that it might seem cliche, though I think I might be able to use the cliche in my favor. Though if I'm going for some sort of Mecca-like place, this area seems too far from where the history of fairies and elves developed, so I will need to think on this more.)

That's a pretty good list to start with. That list will be a lot of work. I think I spent at least two weeks on it for years ago, and right now, I'm going to pour over all my notes again to refresh my memory as to what I chose and why. I might stick with what I had, but I might change my mind on a few things. But that list will keep me plenty busy. Once I get through it, I'll be ready to draw a map. (Woot! I can't wait!)

Do you make lists like this in the early stages of a new story? What things do you put on your list? If you don't make lists, how do you tackle worldbuilding? Share in the comments.


Also, I wanted to let you all know that Shannon Dittemore, Paul Regnier, and I are co-teaching a teen track at this year's Mount Hermon Christian Writers' Conference in San Jose, California the weekend of March 23, 2018. We are going to have so much fun. If you're at all interested, visit the Mount Hermon website for more information.



Monday, January 15, 2018

How To Create Space And Time For Writing



Stephanie Morrill is the creator of GoTeenWriters.com and the author of several young adult novels, including the historical mystery, The Lost Girl of Astor Street (Blink/HarperCollins). Despite loving cloche hats and drop-waist dresses, Stephanie would have been a terrible flapper because she can’t do the Charleston and looks awful with bobbed hair. She and her near-constant ponytail live in Kansas City with her husband and three kids. You can connect with her on FacebookTwitterPinterest, Instagram, and sign up for free books on her author website.


How do I make time to write? 

This was one of the most common write-in responses on the Go Teen Writers survey, and none of us were surprised. For nearly all of us, this is the first real test we'll face as a writer.

Sure, you also need an idea and all that jazz, but the story idea will remain just a piece of your imagination unless you somehow find room in your life to write it.



Even though I started writing stories in first grade, I was never very consistent about writing until my junior year of high school when I took a creative writing class. Then writing become homework and carving out the space and time to do it became mandatory.

I think that's what the majority of us want, whether we admit it or not. We want to have to write. But there will be very few timeseven when you become a published authorthat you have to write. No one will check to make sure you are, and no one will prioritize it for you. That has to start with you.

You have to value your writing first.

In Rising Strong, Brené Brown says, "I've learned...if you don't put value on your work, no one is going to do that for you."



As uncomfortable as it can feel at times, WE have to take the first steps in respecting our writing time. So often we want that respect and value to come from the outside, the way it did when our parents taught us to respect volleyball practice, to do homework, or to value attending church. But if you want to be a writer, and if you want people to respect the time you need to create and what you're creating, you will have to lead.

Stop waiting for ideal.

You want to write. You want to take responsibility. But you're so busy.

I know you are. I don't even know what your current season is, but I'm guessing that whether you're in middle school or college or a new parent, you feel too busy for writing consistently. Too busy for creative thinking.

And yes, there are some seasons where I think it's just not wise to push yourself to write. I have a friend who wants to write, but she works full time and has three children who don't like to let her sleep very much. I'm certainly not going to wag my finger at her and tell her, "If only you tried a little harder..." 

But there are other times (and you probably know instinctively if this is you) that the struggle is actually that the time available to you doesn't feel ideal.

My ideal writing happens first thing in the morning with a cup of coffee, a silent office, foggy weather, and empty hours stretching ahead of me. You know how many times I've experienced my ideal in the last 10 years? ZERO.

You have to look for time that's "good enough." Those fifteen minutes before school? Good enough. The twenty minutes in the doctor's waiting room? Good enough. The hour you have during your brother's math club competition? Bring your laptop or notebook, and that's good enough.

We have this perception that real writers get hours to write because it's their job. That's a myth. What I described up above is reality for most real writers.

Jill writes on her phone. She's a real writer.

Shan writes while she waits for her kids in the pick-up line at school. She's a real writer.

I write when my toddler naps. I'm a real writer.

That's what a real writer does. They don't wait for ideal, they just work the writing in around the rest of life.

Start with spacers, not pulling out teeth

I was at the orthodontist with my ten-year-old daughter last week. She has to have a pallet expander, and the first step of that is inserting spacers between her back two teeth. Look how tiny they are!


They're the round things. Four of them can fit on one finger. (And my office lamp needs to be dusted...)

Yet over a few days, having those tiny spacers between her teeth will create just enough space for something bigger. That's what you're looking forjust enough space in your schedule for writing that it can start to bloom into something bigger.

If you're like me, you suffer from wanting to do All The Things right now. I'm especially prone to this in January. But if you're not accustomed to writing regularly, then trying to make yourself write for hours everyday is only going to stress you out and set you up for failure. If you try to do that, writing is likely to feel like pulling teeth.

If you're not accustomed to writing for long periods every day, let yourself off the hook and try to find a "spacer" of space. Ten minutes before school? 100 words a day? Look for a small place to start, something to help you get momentum going.

Chunk Time and Crack Time

Writer Emily P. Freeman talks about chunk time versus crack time sometimes on the podcast HopeWriters. The majority of writers need "chunks" of time, like several uninterrupted hours, to make really good progress. We can get used to working without them, but it's better when we have chunks of time.

But there are also pieces of the writing life, especially as you move into publication, that you can take care of in the "cracks" of your time. I can respond to social media comments in the five minutes I'm waiting for my kids to be released from school. I can plan blog posts while I make dinner. I can design graphics while I watch a baseball game with my husband.

And sometimes I use crack time to prepare for chunk time. To write a blog post takes a chunk of time, but I use cracks of time to think about the post before I even start writing. Then I'm more efficient with my chunk of time.

But sometimes I've guilty of using my chunk time for activities that I can do during crack time. (And then whining later that I didn't get as much writing done as I wanted to...)

Is there anything keeping you from writing today? Are you waiting for permission? For ideal time? Something else? Or do you have the time, but you're choosing something else instead? 

What's something you can do to create a bit more space for writing?

(I'm in Orlando soaking up the Wizarding World of Harry Potter with McKenna, so it may be a few days before I'm able to respond to your comments!)


One last note from community members Naomi Downing and Taylor Bennett:

Are you the only writer in your family? Maybe you’d go so far as to say you’re the only writer in your group of friends.

But… what if there was a place you could go to bounce ideas off of other writers? Somewhere online, so you didn’t have to travel anywhere to participate…

That’s what Inkling Chats are all about! They’re an opportunity for writers, new and experienced, young and old, to come and chat about questions writers all face at some point during their journey.

Inkling Chats will be happening on Twitter at 4PM EST every last Sunday of the month, and they’re hosted by Taylor Bennett, author of Porch Swing Girl, and me—Naomi Downing. You can follow us, @writer_taylor and @Naomihdowning and use #InklingChats to keep up with the conversation. We’d love to have you join us as we offer advice on how to stay inspired, share what draws into a book, and more!









Friday, January 12, 2018

Committing to an Idea

Shannon Dittemore is the author of the Angel Eyes novels. She has an overactive imagination and a passion for truth. Her lifelong journey to combine the two is responsible for a stint at Portland Bible College, performances with local theater companies, and an affinity for mentoring teen writers. Since 2013, Shannon has taught mentoring tracks at a local school where she provides junior high and high school students with an introduction to writing and the publishing industry. For more about Shan, check out her website, Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and Pinterest

I'm so excited about 2018, you guys! This whole #GrowAnAuthor business is going be fun. If you haven't caught our first two posts of the new year introducing our plan, play a little catch up and read them both here and here.

Today, I'm going to give you all a peek inside my head. Because the first thing I have to do when starting a book is commit to an idea.

I'm very rarely writing more than one story at a time. In fact, I'm so bad at working on two projects simultaneously, that I do my very best to ignore any new story idea that comes knocking while I'm immersed in a manuscript that needs finishing. If an idea won't leave me alone, I allow myself a few minutes to dictate the idea into an email and then I save it in my 'Drafts' folder. Currently, there are sixteen ideas hanging out in my folder, waiting on me.

The simple act of saying or typing the idea out and tucking it away, frees me to focus on whatever it is that I'm supposed to be completing. Because here's the thing, friends. If we're going to grow an author, we really do have to finish what we start. Finishing is important.

When the time does come for me to select a new project, my 'Drafts' folder is the first place I look. At this point, I'm fairly void of ideas. I've emptied myself and all my words into my last project and am needing the energy of a bright, shiny idea to tempt me from my exhaustion.

And the honest truth is this: the answer is rarely in my 'Drafts' folder. I can't speak for every writer out there, but for me, those ideas that set about pestering me when I was working away were there for one reason: to distract me. To keep me from actually finishing what I set out to do. And while some of the ideas have promise, they've been hanging out in the back of my head so long they've lost their shine.

It's unfair to them, I'm sure, but I'm not the same writer I was when those ideas initially appealed to me. I've written myself into a new place. I've grown. And I'm ready for an idea that fits the new me.


In most cases, the idea I commit to comes while I'm taking time away from the keyboard. The idea usually arrives with a vivid image and a WHAT IF question that needs answering.

While the circumstances surrounding a first novel are always a little unique, I committed to my debut, Angel Eyes, only after the image of a halo captured my attention and refused to let go. And then the question: What if we could see the invisible?

And even then, even after I had the image and the question, I can't say I was completely sold on the idea. At that moment, I would have told you that, "Yes! This is it! This is my golden idea!" But, really, REALLY, one night's excitement about an idea is not commitment.

Commitment happens only after you've hit a few roadblocks and fought your way through. Like any marriage, pushing on despite adversity means you've landed on something that might be worth keeping.

I'm currently in this place with a fantastically tempting idea. I'm all in. At least I think I am. I WANT this to be the one. I've written a thousand words on it this project and though I'm not at all impressed, I'm not dissuaded. I haven't ruined the idea for myself. I still have a desire to puzzle my way through this question and I want to know more about the image haunting me.

And so, in a few days time, maybe a few weeks, I'll know. This idea and I will date. We'll dance a bit. We'll argue some too (because in every good marriage there are disagreements) and if, after all that, I am still excited about this idea, I will accept its proposal. I'll commit. And for as long as it takes me to complete it, I will do my very best to stay all in.

Because there will be hard times. There will be days when I get it wrong. When my characters talk back. When my story world folds in on itself. When my magic system backfires. There will be days when I want to give up and try out that striking new idea flashing across my mind.

That's why I take my time with an idea up front. I don't commit right away. I stew and I think and I scribble and when, at last, I know it's chosen me? That's the moment I'm all in.

How about you? How do you commit to an idea?

Wednesday, January 10, 2018

Writing a New Story: Where I Start

Jill Williamson is a chocolate loving, daydreaming, creator of kingdoms. She writes weird books in lots of weird genres like fantasy (Blood of Kings and Kinsman Chronicles), science fiction (Replication), and dystopian (The Safe Lands trilogy). She has a podcast/vlog at www.StoryworldFirst.com. You can also find Jill on InstagramFacebookTwitterPinterest, or on her author website. Tagboth (Tag for short) is a goldhorn dragon from Belfaylinn, a hidden fantasy realm on the western end of the Sargasso Sea. Jill is working on the first book of this tale for this year's Grow an Author series.

Happy 2018!

I am ready to write. Are you?

I'm so excited about our Grow an Author series. As we move through 2018, Stephanie, Shannon, and I are each going to take you through our process of writing a new story. Because I am me, I can't do this without having a story to work on. So I dug through my files and pulled out Onyx Eyes, the book I was writing on my author blog back in 2014. I had to stop because I sold the Kinsman Chronicles. And four years later, I have completed that epic saga (whoo hoo!), and Onyx Eyes is still calling to me. Especially, Tagboth, the goldhorn dragon in my picture above. Tagboth is an important part of the Onyx Eyes story, so he is going to be sitting on my desk, reminding me not to forget him.

Another perk to writing this story? I named my main character girl Kaitlyn, after my daughter. Four years ago, Kaitlyn was ten, and this was all silly fun. Today, Kaitlyn is a month from turning fourteen, a bookworm, and she will have her say as to what happens to her character in this book. She has already vetoed several things I had planned to do back in 2014 and insisted that Kaitlyn's character get to have a romantic storyline with hero Drake. So, yeah. Buh bye, fairy princess love interest. The human girl Kaitlyn is calling the shots for herself this time around.

This shall be fun, methinks. *grin*



Where I Start

I'm the kind of person who always has a dozen story ideas I want to work on. All the time. I pine over old story ideas I've had to put down. I wish I could write everything that pops into my head. Alas, I cannot, and so I must choose.

How did I choose this time around? Well, I narrowed it down to the top two stories I was desperate to write, then I chose the one that best fit my target audience: you, teen writers. Onyx Eyes is a YA fantasy, so it best fits my needs for this year's blogging plan. Not only will it help me to have a story to work on as I explain my process, it will help me work on a story that for the past five years, I've been desperate to write!

Now, if I had narrowed it down and all my stories were YA fantasy ideas, then I would have chosen the one I wanted to write the most. And if it was a tie, then I would have chosen the one that I felt was the most salable. The one that would appeal to the greatest number of readers. (Because while I do write for fun [and because I can't not write], I also need to make a living, and I really, really, really don't want to have to go and get a part-time job to help my family pay the bills. So, sometimesmany timesI have to think business.)

That decided, let me tell you where this idea came from. Five years ago, my husband was working as a youth pastor with me as his trusty sidekick. This also meant that I did a lot of volunteer work with our church. One of the things I did was work with little kids, teaching Sunday School and making crafts. One such craft was a bracelet with beads that tell the story of Jesus. This craft has many incarnations, like colored jelly bean "jewels" in a jar or the wordless book version. I'm sure there are more. The point is, as the littles and I were crafting, I got thinking about the themes each color in the bracelet represented. And I thought, What if I wrote a series of books in which each story had one of these colors as a theme? And that got me thinking about color as a magic, which got me thinking about gemstones having power, which got me thinking about what kind of people would use natural stones for magic, which got me thinking about fairies.

Yes. I would write a book about fairies in which magic was powered by colored stones of all kinds.

Epic, right?

I started with a list of the themes from the colored bracelet craft. They are: black = sin, red = sacrifice, white = rebirth, green = growth, and yellow = eternal home. There are several variations as to the order. Some start with yellow, some end with green. Some include blue and purple. But knowing how long it takes to write a series of books (I still haven't finished the Mission League series yet, which has six books), I decided to stick with five themes.

That decided, I was itching to draw a map, but I wasn't ready yet. I needed a basic story to give me a foundation to plan from. Since the first book would have a theme of black = sin, and since I didn't want to start out the series with a lawbreaking antihero, I decided to have my main character break a magical law out of desperation and lack of trust in those around him. I came up with the idea of two nations at war. One kidnaps the other nation's princess, and my hero, her guard, must get her back. As I thought more about my fairies, I wanted them to be the size of humans. I pictured something more like Tolkein's Legolas than Disney's Tinkerbell. This led me to creating two races of fae, which I tentatively called aerials and grounders. (Still not sure I love those terms.) Aerials have wings. Grounders do not. My hero, a grounder, must sneak into the aerial kingdom to rescue the grounder princess. He believes he can only do this by impersonating an aerial, and since he does not have wings, he sets out into the mountains with the intent of wielding a forbidden bonding spell with a dragon (enter Tagboth), which will enable him to grow wings.

That was a good enough start to get my brain working hard. Next week I'll show you how I make lists of the things I will need to worldbuild for this series as I gear up to create a map.


Have you chosen a story to work on in 2018? Share in the comments what you're working on.
And let us know where you start planning a new story.